1.\u00a0 Agreed with Simon Davies to have 3 weeks in August\/September to try and tidy up cut\/make stab at multi-screen version.<\/p>\n
2.\u00a0 Had viewing for Maureen.\u00a0 Her notes separate, but issues of Narcissus sympatheticness, some casting aspects – young man not attractive enough, and tightening up story.\u00a0<\/p>\n
3.\u00a0 Keep thinking back to where Humphry and I were on location looking at Leonie’s storyboard, and discussing where to put the camera, particularly on Echo chasing Narcissus scene through forest.\u00a0 Slightly rainy, had been raining all morning, preventing filming, but also Humphry had been off meeting Skillset, so a bit hurried when he came back.\u00a0 Relied very heavily on Humphry’s insights so must ask him for feedback when looking at the footage.\u00a0 However, wasn’t at all\u00a0clear about whether characters should leave frame or stay in same frame.\u00a0 Have a feeling that footage is all too loose, and that we haven’t got the tight shots to get us through the edit, but this is in advance and we can always have a look.<\/p>\n
4.\u00a0 Tentative plan for edit – edit the chase scene with Echo and Narcissus, the rejection of Amenius, his death and narration by Tiresias„ and several endings.\u00a0 Also have a go at the installation slo mo… but get the sound OK first.<\/p>\n
5.\u00a0 Aparna reminded me of Mike’s offer of the Planetarium for a showing.\u00a0 Although this couldn’t be the 5 screen showing as designed, it could be interim multiscreen – like storyboard, projected on walls, and might be useful. Also need collaboration between institutions.\u00a0 Is question big enough to make this worthwhile?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
1.\u00a0 Agreed with Simon Davies to have 3 weeks in August\/September to try and tidy up cut\/make stab at multi-screen version. 2.\u00a0 Had viewing for Maureen.\u00a0 Her notes separate, but issues of Narcissus sympatheticness, some casting aspects – young man not attractive enough, and tightening up story.\u00a0 3.\u00a0 Keep thinking back to where Humphry and … <\/p>\n